Sunday, October 19, 2014

Regret by judging

Once, there was a boy named Lance, and Lance was born and grew up in France. He always wore a red t-shirt and some grey pants and no one ever really gave him a chance. Let's cut to the chase and talk about his face, Lance was really ugly and had a little tummy, he walked really funny and was little grumpy. He liked this girl Jen, but she turned him down cause he didnt look like a men. Until one day Lance was tired of all of it, he lost it. Lost all weight, the grump and the walk, then he learned how to go up the girls and talk. Lance turned himself into a real men, to the point where girls asked for his number "heres the pen". He grew up to be wealthy, had a lot of money and married a beautiful honey. He had this big house with a pool in the back and a track, if you ran it all you would have cought a heart attack. Lance became famouse for owening half of Los Angeles. He was on a lot of talk shows, and would blow real nices o's, from the cigar the he usually smoked in his car cause he drove real far. Lance changed himself, he went from being a no life, that no one wanted, to having the choice of picking any girl that he could've wifed. One day Lance bumped in to Jen, and Jen saw what she could've had, but she remembered she turned him down cause he looked really bad. Lance seeing the regret in her eyes seeing the mistake that she made, and in his eyes she just backed up and started to fade. This right here is a lessin, dont judge a book by its cover or just like Jen you would have missed out on a life you would have called a blessin.

2 comments:

  1. Wow, i lreally love the rhyming, it's very cool. I guess we should all take Lance's example of never giving up on ourselves when we are judged or turned down. Judging others is not our job beacause it only brings shame when we see the person that we judged rising up high on a higher level than us. I think people should learn how to live with others and embrace their differences.

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  2. This is beautiful! I think not many people understand how hard it is when you regret something. This could really open someones eyes on giving people chances and not judging them on their looks or the clothes that they wear cause just like Jen, they could regret everything they said or done and its too late to fix things.

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